Mum please awake

by Boy   Mar 5, 2005


Mum please awake why u r not awaking why why you are not awaking!!

mum please awake look i am sorry i did not eat food you were saying to me for eat last night. mum i m sorry you knew that i was hungry but i did not eat. i m sorry
mum awake i want to eat food from your hands now like you always make me eat you can not leave me alone i m just 9

mum tomorrow is my birthday
you said me to give surprised gift what happened you cannot leave me. awake why r u not awaking

you cannot die so soon
mum you have to care me
i m just 9 year old girl.
i m so little mother please awake

you told when i was 2 years old dad left us i was so little baby mum now you cannot sleep
forever i need you mum
i am just 9

mum i am crying you don’t want to see me in cry ever mum you always make me happy. I m crying make me stop my tears are falling on your neck mum don’t you feeling don’t you feeling
don’t you listen i m crying please awake

mum i promise i will daily go to school mum i promise i will eat food in time mum i promise i will not cry ever allot mum are you listening!!! mum

who will care us without you
look jack is crying mom awake he is just 6 mum he is not crying for food he wants to play with you
he feels better with you. you make him laugh please awake
and make him stop for cry

he dont listen me mum awake there is no one ours without you
we are alone you cannot leave us both mum i am just 9 year old.we both need you how i will care my younger brother we both cannot go anywhere we are so little

God ; my younger brother
he is just 6 year old what will i tell him when he will ask to me where our mumy and daddy? when he will older we are so little!!!

mum we are both hungry we want to eat something give us something for eat mum dont you listen. please awake jack is still crying allot please awake
mum awake he is just 6

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  • 16 years ago

    by Kitten

    Wow really good poem it seems like its written by a nine year old with the way the words are put together and everything i dont know if you ment for it to be like that but it works really well