I love this. An excellent display of savage war portrayed through graphic imageries and detailed descriptions of poetic substance. the language technique is valued throughout the work as a useful prop for the ongoing atmosphere of a brutal war of ancient Rome. I admire your terribley wonderful detail and the way you portray the respect and dismay through the narrator. I especially admire the lines,
"a slight into our coexistence of all mortal’s breath, as cruelty lasts throughout the throes of the sword’s peak, but most of all ravaging mercy."
those words were written powerfully adding a lasting impact on the reader. Excellent