by Noelle k. Mar 5, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Put a fake smile on your face day after day, after a while nobody can see the real you, the troubles your going threw. the depression flickering inside of you. they'll never know in to you leave that note saying you couldn't take it anymore and just had to let go. nobody will understand how you felt or why you did what you did... they'll pounder and wounder about your decision to leave this place... |
by ~Kady~
And i will take the time to say...Oh well poems are poems! hehehe Good job! Very nice poem! 5! Keep it up! |
by Dark Savior
I liked the poem and i think it was a good poem and i really enjoyed it and there is a lot of things that seeemed to be used a lot in most of the poems that are around here. |
this subject is overly used, please dont be offended by me but i do believe you could do better like you stated...so i'll check out more. |