Wow..this poem was truly amazing..Great work Heather..as always! Keep on writting!
5outta5
Shannon

great poem! i love it! really sad but so easy to relate to and no i don't really switch categories lol keep it up!

Love, Taylor

~ beautiful piece of poetry, very very beautiful
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Gah Heather how do you write so good? All your poems are just like excellent. Keep writing!

"Upon my silent, misunderstood frame,
lies an endless stream of contagious hurt...
upon the stars that glaze upon me
is the temporary feeling of comfort."

I love this stanza...it is beautiful!
I really liked the honesty in this piece!
Great job as always~Holly

5/5 very good!! PLP

~lil slam~

bathetic? I think you meant Pathetic.. Either way it was really well written and I liked it alot!

no sweetheart, i meant bathetic, bathetic means overemotional/sadness/etc...check a thesaurus if you don't believe me but hey, don't feel bad, I taught my poetry teacher the meaning too :)

with love,
Heather