My friend

by Hurtingsoul   Mar 5, 2005


I cant fight this misery no more
my whole body is becoming sore
this knife became my friend
and now its guiding me to my end

What happened to be a release
only became my disease
i only used it to drown pain
but my Friend made me live in vain

I gave my friend blood
and my friend gave me scars
it made me addicted
and made me feel so convicted

My friend violated my body
oh and made it so lovely
my friend my sin
will never stop, it will always begin

It will make me cry
it will never have hands to dry
my bloody tears
cause my friend started my fears

But now i will break my friendship
i will break its metallic heart

Cause i can fight this misery once more
my whole body is becoming strong
my friend the knife doesn't belong
and now I'm guiding to its end.......

**I'm kinda of trying to stop i know the poem is bad but rate and comment please**

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  • 19 years ago

    by broken angel

    I like it, and I kind of know how you feel. If you want advice, help,someone to vent to about all the s h i t going on, you can talk to me anytime. Excellent poem, you really did an outstanding job on it. No, really!
    Luv always, KT

  • 19 years ago

    by Arianna

    Hey Arlene
    I like this poem alot^_^
    It has alot of depth

  • 19 years ago

    by SuicideQueen

    i think your an amazing poet for someone so young
    keep it up swetie
    kt xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie Lynn

    I dont know what you were talking about when you said it was bad, i thought it was great! i am glad that you are trying to stop cutting yourself! i wish i had that much courage...5/5
    love
    ~Katie~

  • 19 years ago

    by EoB

    Good poem=) I really like it.

    I didn't mean much, only that I have read to many poems with the same topic today, and that I am tired of it. There is nothing you can do though, and there is certainly nothing wrong with your poems. They are great