What Happened...?

by Heather M Craig   Mar 5, 2005


What happened to your smile?
It ceases to any longer exist...
What happened to your skin?
It's not suppossed to be scarred like this...

What happened to your eyes?
To swollen from your tears...
What happened to your mind?
Destroyed through your fears...

What happened to your faith?
To sheltered in your cage...
What happened to your love?
To explicated with rage....

What happened to your heart?
It's to broken to mend...
What happened to you?
I miss my best friend.

-Heather M Craig-

written in the eyes of my best friends ... took out of their words spoken.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Shadows Collide

    This a great, straight to the point poem. Having been depressed and also the friend of someone suffering from depression, u can understand how other people view u when you're low urself. It's very difficult to relate to people when theyre depressed, this poem reitterates this perfectly.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Heather, This was absolutely a beautiful poem that was well written. This same thing has happened to me a few times, but oh well, it didn't take it long for the rating to go up. Jealousy has alot to do with it. Well done and enjoyed, as always. hugs, lol, *Ann*

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    omg someone gave this a one!? don't take them seriouse, never, i thought this was excellent work! 5/5, i know what it feels like getting a one, and it isn't good, don't listen to them, ever! PLP

    ~lil slam~

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    another awesome one it's definately a 5

  • 19 years ago

    by Amit

    ~ one word -----> 'wow!~' , excellent poem heather. its good you write all types of poems, i write only love poems and friendship poems, because my inspiration is nidhi and only nidhi, its only because of her that i am a poet today! and my poems are always rated bad! dunno y someone is so jealous of me! i give my comments on the poems, if there are any suggestions, i do tell them +ve or -ve, but i never give anyone less than 5 and rank them down
    ~ anyways, u wer asking whether nidhi hasn't seen my poems or not, she has seen just 3 of them, and that too bad ones, i mean when i just started writing. she went to her uncle's place on feb. 5, she wasn't home or online, she's home now finally, today! im very happy, and u know what! my 'favorites' status is changed to a golden 'f', she's lucky for me. see? i wrote an email for her, its 320 kilobyes of text, including my poems, about how was my every day wiht(out) her. just like a online diary. she wasn't here from 5th feb. its full 1 month now. i think she'll love to read it. also, i have 1 new snap to give her. our b'days are near too, mine is 16th march and her b'day is 17th march... i'll be 21 and she'll be 18, legally able to marry one another :) i think she'll love to read my poems too! anyways, i should stop now, otherwise it would be a long off-topic comment :(
    ~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit