Mr. Invincible

by Shelby G.   Mar 6, 2005


(NOTE: "Mr. Invincible" is God)

The cold air is blowing, and I can feel you (I can taste you)
The ice water flowing, and I can hear you (I can taste you)
Outside it's snowing, and I can see you (I can tase you)
Your fear is showing, but I can't hurt you (No one can hurt you)

Mr. Invincible, he hides from all he sees
He feeds off innocence of the youth, creating his disease
He made you beleive he's made you very pleased
And Mr. Invincible has always failed to cease

He eats the wings off flies
He watches his children die
He claims he feels and cries
Invincible behind his lies

Because of you Heaven is crying, But do you care? (You don't care)
Because of you Hell is frying, But will you help? (You won't help)
Because of you earth is dieing, But can you see? (You can't see)
Just stay behind your walls of lieing, because you never cared!

Mr. Invincible, he watches you fall apart
He laughs at you because he's stole your heart
We think he's great and he'll see us when we depart

Mr. Invincible shows us were we can't go
Mr. Invincible won't teach us what we don't know
He only pretends to love me, and you

He hides behind his crown of filth
Drowning in his sickened wealth
He's laughing when the children cry
Invincible under all his lies

He doesn't love us, Nobody loves us
He doesn't love us, he only lets us die
He doesn't love us, Nobody loves us
He doesn't love us, He watches as we die

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  • 19 years ago

    by Johnny Mac

    Hey, really nice job, i see you and I share the same ideas about life.. Check out my poem called questions, i got another new one as well.. Keep up the good work girl, much love your friend johnny

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    wow, great poem.. very well-written!
    5/5.. please check out my poem "My Dad: Dead And Gone Forever" it would mean a lot to me..
    thanx,hugs

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    I liked this one better than the first one I read. This poem is really good not that the other wasn't just saying I think it's another great poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma

    I really like this poem and it has been written really well. Good Job. Keep writing. Love Emma xxx

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