Hidden Smile

by AngelOfFear   Mar 6, 2005


She walks alone
as she stands her ground
feels so small
but looks so proud
her chin held high
her smile wide
her laugh out loud
is just a sound
locked in her room
on the floor
tear stained pillow
but no tears fall
left for once
on her own
no one can bother.. shes all alone
she sits, locked, in her space
a cold, lonely empty place
as she rocks in her corner
she knows it now
shes has nothing left
except her fall
now came her last chance, to escape
she tighs her neck
round with a drape
as her body hangs high
that heart felt smile
is full of pride
for now she shows her colours
she has no reason to hide

** as with most my poems now my ends are really messing up.. pleaaaaaase can some people leave comments on how i can improve them.. and my poetry in general.. thanks :)**

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  • 19 years ago

    by AngelOfFear

    thanks :P woo.. sure thing... :D

  • 19 years ago

    by AngelOfFear

    thanks :P woo.. sure thing... :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    no it wasnt messed up. i loved it! and can u send me that last pic that was in your profile? i liked it XD and is it okay if i use it as my avy on these boards i am? (i gave ur poem a 5 btw)