Glommy

by xxangelchicxx2000   Mar 6, 2005


The clouds are Grey
Its gloomy outside
That’s just like I feel inside
My mood is bitter
Because of my life
Every thing is messed up
Because you got in a fight
Now you are grounded
Lying in your hospital bed
I am not allow to see you
While you fight your death
I don’t want you to die
I want you to live
You are the person
I want to spend my life with
While I cry, pray, and threat to kill
Doctors tell me it’s going be ok
You are probably going to live
But they tell your parents
That it’s not true
You lost a lot of blood
And it doesn’t look good
Then I see you twitch
In your room
And that’s when I knew
It’s all over for you
Now I am alone
And I feel gloomy
All because you died
Leaving me
You said we were going to be
Together for all eternity
Now you got in a stupid fight
And just left without me
Why did you leave without me?
How come you don’t have an answer for me?
Please speak to me ~!!~

Please read/vote/comment on this poem it really means a lot to me.
Thanks~!!~

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  • 19 years ago

    by Carmen

    this one was fair. i think my favorite from you so far is 'losing you'. i think you should make another like that, are at least rhyme like that one did. still good! keep it up! never give up!

  • 19 years ago

    by Krystin

    Aw. I really loved this poem and felt the true emotion behind the lines. Kepp up the excellent work!

    :) xoxKrystin

    God bless

  • 19 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    very expressive poem maybe allowed would fit better in this line
    I am not allow to see you

  • 19 years ago

    by Selfrejected

    again kick ass poem...4/5...oo yeah and sorry for commenting on your other poem twice...wasnt paying attention...

  • 19 years ago

    by happy days

    very good, i really enjoyed reading this poem although it was very sad, keep up the good work xxxxx