by xxangelchicxx2000 Mar 6, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
The clouds are Grey |
by Carmen
this one was fair. i think my favorite from you so far is 'losing you'. i think you should make another like that, are at least rhyme like that one did. still good! keep it up! never give up! |
by Krystin
Aw. I really loved this poem and felt the true emotion behind the lines. Kepp up the excellent work! |
very expressive poem maybe allowed would fit better in this line |
by Selfrejected
again kick ass poem...4/5...oo yeah and sorry for commenting on your other poem twice...wasnt paying attention... |
by happy days
very good, i really enjoyed reading this poem although it was very sad, keep up the good work xxxxx |