"This whole piece was a moment struck by lightening...when trapped beneath the water and convinced you're going to die...that moment of utter hopelessness and despair, when light cannot possibly penetrate the thick membranes with which you've strangled your mind with fear....unintentionally imprisoning it thus from salvation".
Something a psychic would undoubtedley see, or close.
Your impressionism is flawless, your stanza's are beautifully miserable, and its content is rich with vivid misery.
Bold, frightening, and dark.

HOWD U DO THAT??

Hey THis is awesomw and beautifully written. Keep up the good work.

I believe in evolution and the scientific theorys of the way the earth came about. we have PROOF. And I didn't need to explain myself, but I did anyway.

Wow. This was so emotioanally said. You certainly had a lot on your mind when you were writing this. You should have more votes man, pure brilliance.
-A

beautiful gave it a 5 xxxxx

I seriously think you should consider publishing!