that is such a sad poem...i've been in a similiar situation, i feel like that a lot and you made me look at it differently, whoever you are writing this to is so lucky to have you girl you don't understand! i can tell how much you love him, if he doesn't love you back just as much i'm disgusted with him! Keep writing, thats a really powerful poem

I feel like that about how I look, He is a lucky b**ger to have you and he should know that.......5 xxx

I can totally relate to tht poem. Your a gd writer. 5/5

Well I must say I liked the idea a lot, it was unique! The flow was a bit bumpy though, work on that a bit. I really liked this poem so i don't really know what to say. Keep writing, take care.
Satuxxa

awwww that was cute

OMG.....i love this poem its sweet and sad at the same time..<3 reading this