Suicidal Pain

by ShadowedPhoenix   Mar 6, 2005


I'm watching these tablets
and noticing how the pain vanishes.
I think of the relief it would bring
to be free from them again!!

If I was dead,
No one could hurt me, They always said,
"She's to weak to move on!"
And this would prove them all wrong....

I'd move on..... To another place.
Where life would move at my pace,
Where no 1 can judge me,
Reality would be what I wanted it to be!

People couldn't leave me alone,
Always wanting me to be some 1 else's clone,
Don't complain that I ended my life,
Just be grateful I never used the knife!!!!!

Whether I kill myself or whether you kill me,
I'm still happy!!
I'm still dead, gone
And free of this SuIcIdAl PaIn which was here for way to long!!!!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I totally relate, I go through the same pain every day!!! I really like this poem, it's very intense.

  • 19 years ago

    by Rocky

    very expressive and very intent i gave it a 4/5, i understand where your coming from, keep writing i like it a lot

  • 19 years ago

    by ºCrimsonTearsº

    wow, great poem. if this is true then i no exactly how you feel. im here to talk if you want
    much love, shell x

  • 19 years ago

    by Danny

    Another great poem

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    writen in the heat of anger. I suppose it was a good poem, you were too close to the subject i think....no offense. I think you should just step back and go back to your roots. Love poems...you do them much better.

    Five/Five

    P.S. i can't remember if you commented on my poem, but if you have/are going to. Thank you.

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