Really good!
XOXO
Across The Universe

writen in the heat of anger. I suppose it was a good poem, you were too close to the subject i think....no offense. I think you should just step back and go back to your roots. Love poems...you do them much better.

Five/Five

P.S. i can't remember if you commented on my poem, but if you have/are going to. Thank you.

Another great poem

wow, great poem. if this is true then i no exactly how you feel. im here to talk if you want
much love, shell x

very expressive and very intent i gave it a 4/5, i understand where your coming from, keep writing i like it a lot

I totally relate, I go through the same pain every day!!! I really like this poem, it's very intense.