~ very sad
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Very good idea about the movie. You did a great job and it showed feeling! Check out some of mine if u could Thanx!

that would be freaky to watch your own life....but yeah good poem, i liked it. 5/5!!!
SatuzKa

Another good poem, anyone with depression can read straight in to it. Keep writing

Nice twist with the moviescreen, I really liked it. Once again, great work!

Such a powerful poem. The cinema screen comparison made everything seem larger than life. Well done.

Take care,
Karen
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this is a good poem