that is so sad but a gr8 piece of writing

that was truly beautiful! i gave it 5!
thanks for ur comment on my poem
---- yes that did actually all happen to me
if u liked it u might like my newest 2 poems 'the boy with no name part 1&2'
check em out if u like - id love ur opinion.

im so glad u told me about ur peom is good keep writitng - all the best Holly

WOW! great job on this poem!