Can't make one sound

by ~*~Yummy Mummy~*~   Mar 6, 2005


My wrists are sore
My eyes are red
Theres blood on the floor
It's blood that I've shed
As I lay there on the floor
Red water all around
I lay there silent
Not making a sound
Then I pick up the razor
Lay it on my arm
One more cut
Couldn't do any harm
I put pressure on the razor
And I hear the slice
This cut felt so good
It felt really nice
I could feel the blood
running down my arm
Just one last cut
Couldn't do any harm
My wrists are sore
My eyes are red
Theres blood on the floor
It's blood that I've shed
As i lay there on the floor
Red water all around
I lay there silent
Can't make one sound

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  • 19 years ago

    by confusion

    great poem, i thought the repeated parts worked well, keep it up!

    lu -x-x-x-

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Another great poem! I noticed u do well with this type of poems! Keep writing! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    wow i loved this poem so sad but so much meaning and pain
    keep writing

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Matt

    wow this is a really amazing poem
    the use of language techniques is really good.
    xxxkeep writingxxx

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