wow this is a really amazing poem
the use of language techniques is really good.
xxxkeep writingxxx

wow i loved this poem so sad but so much meaning and pain
keep writing

Jacs
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Another great poem! I noticed u do well with this type of poems! Keep writing! Take Care! Brooke 5/5

great poem, i thought the repeated parts worked well, keep it up!

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