By reading this I totally felt your pain....I can really relate, I never had the love from my mom and it hurts....Keep your head up!!!

its still good to have love for ur mum i am sure she sout there thinking of you ..a mother never fogets her children... and i think most of the time when mums give they children away its for te best and so the children can have a better life and i hope u are ok now ?
take care

its weird for an 11 year old to comment a 20 year old but, That is how some of us feel when mommys not there to hug at night. Its really hard to deal with something like that..YM.

thats a sad story, but nicely written, i like how you switched it up with the But's and followed the same form as the previous section. good job!

anouther good poem. It sounds like your mum isn't a very nice person though. Is she? I just get a certain bad vibe when I read these poems about her. Its all good though. Keep up the good work.

im glad u wrote it hun it brought a tear 2 my eye! xx keep writing xxx

I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :)

Hi, i am glad i found this poem, the title stood out to me and drew me in to read it.

i really like the topic of this poem as like you said it is hard to write about but when it is written it is very powerful and makes an excellent poem.

what i like about the poem is how you write what you want and then you go on to repeat it but in the reality of what is, i think that works really well.

i also like the ending verse when you say you still love your mum because it just how things work isnt it, no matter what has been done or said you still have feelings for your parents. think it is part of being human and i think this poem shows a good example of this.

i relate a lot to this poem and how you feel, so i can imagine how hurt you feel and let down you feel by her. please keep writing i think this is really good.

xx