by Daniel Mulvany Mar 6, 2005
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
Given all the circumstance, all this choice will bring, |
I liked it all but the last line dosnt seem to fit the rest as i thought it should, but thats just me, either way.. good work! |
Such a sweet title. As a believer I sensed a hunger for understanding and faith. You don't seen many religous poem so this was pleasing to read. It was so marvellously penned it sounded like a prayer....Good stuff... |
This piece was very inspiring to the fatithful. Your words were very respectful and lovely throughout. |