Star

by lakitu   Mar 6, 2005


When you stand outside,
And look up into the night sky,
You will see that lonely shining star,
That’s me watching down from you from afar.

Even when its daylight,
Even though you can't see me,
I promise you i'm there,
I'm there cos i love you are care.

I'm really not strong enough,
I just can't cope with life,
Thats why for the last time,
i've picked up the knife.

I'm sorry if i hurt you,
Its the last thing i want to do,
But just look into that sky,
cos i'm always there for you.

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  • 19 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    Aww that's sad...but in a way sweet...don't kill yourself though....i'm here if you need to talk or anything...*hugs* keep your head up and keep on writing....this is a good poem =)

    -brittnay-
    *silly bi+ch*
    ~cloudy sky~
    =Armidillo Buttkisser=

    p.s. i like your name....it suits the hippie/tree hugger club! LOL...us tree huggers rock, man! lol...

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    WOW
    so much feeling, so well written, so deep.
    keep up the good work.

    Jacs
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    That was beautiful but so very sad! Very well written! I haven't read any of your poems in awhile. Sorry I really enjoy reading your work! 5/5 Take Care~! Brooke

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    don't kill yourself...omg. so sad!! I hope you're okay!!!1

    ~Sierra

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