You moved but still together(coulnt think of a good title)

by justine   Mar 6, 2005


We started going out for one week,
thats when my friend told me u were moving with your dad and it made me so weak.
we went to my best friends, also your cousins, and the tears came out in dozens.
were still going to be together, even though none of our friends think we can make it.
your coming back in a couple of years,
and youll see all of my tears.
i have faith in us,
cuz when your in love, u can make anything happen.

i love u jeromie and i cant wait to hold u again.

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  • 18 years ago

    by MiMi

    OMG. This happened to me. My man moved to Chicago and i didnt know wut to do. Its been 5 months he is back to visit for 4 days and wow im happpy we are still together. I its true when you are in love youll do anything to make it work. Great poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Misstress

    Hi..
    Ive run all of ur writings.
    I think youve got your own style and potential..
    Try some rhythm and stanzas.
    Im sure it wouldl be better.
    ;)
    Keep on writing.

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