Positive Thinking

by DeAnna   Mar 6, 2005


I hear the tick of the clock
as time passes me by
You can never make time stop,
no matter how hard you try
Time will keep going
day by day
but just remember that
everything will be OK
Just much also remember
to always keep trying,
even if you do feel like dying.
You just always remember
to keep going on
Even if all hope
seems to be gone.
And just forget
about what's happened in the past
and forever live every day
as if it's your last!

yeah.. this poem is gay, but i was bored, and couldn't think of anything depressing to write about so i thought i'd go a different way... it sux i know

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  • 19 years ago

    by DeAnna

    This is like one of the only happy poems i've written, and i wrote it a while back.... but i guess ur right, it doesn't totally suck.. i'm glad i've reached someone.. thanks for reading and commenting on my poems!

  • 19 years ago

    by Lucy

    no no no no it was brilliant! its a really happy poem! recently ive been feeling depressed because of falling out with friends and things but reading that cheered me up. it really made me think that everything can get better and will get better. it puts faith in me. well done, keep it up. you should write more poems like this. take care, luv ya, lucy x