no no no no it was brilliant! its a really happy poem! recently ive been feeling depressed because of falling out with friends and things but reading that cheered me up. it really made me think that everything can get better and will get better. it puts faith in me. well done, keep it up. you should write more poems like this. take care, luv ya, lucy x

This is like one of the only happy poems i've written, and i wrote it a while back.... but i guess ur right, it doesn't totally suck.. i'm glad i've reached someone.. thanks for reading and commenting on my poems!