Cry Like the Lonely Moon

I wish I had that many pretty words in my vocalbulary as you have. It makes the poems better. short but effectfull!

Firstly, it's a sign of utter ignorance that you have the rating you do for this poem.

Second, "hide" being at the end of the second line reads a bit oddly for the flow, though I enjoy the alliteration.

Third, quit prefacing poems with statements about a poem not being great.

Fourth, that said... Amilo, this is a truly beautiful poem. The imagery is tragic, almost heart-rending, and so very, very sublime.

This is poetry.

It was short but showed emotion I like reading a poem that u can feel the meaning in it as u read. U could always add on to this if u wanted to take more time to work with it. I think it is good the way it is but might be better if u add to it. Some of the shorter poems can end up being the best. I am not very good I haven't been writing long so I can't really give much advice if u know what I mean. Feel free to check out mine and anwser honest! Thanx

Hey, that was great work, but sounds so sad to me. Hope you are ok now. Take care and be safe!

very good. keep it up. and thanks foe commenting on my poems means alot to me you know~!!~
xoxox
nida
5/5