Unforgiven Care

by littleshadowgirl   Mar 7, 2005


The Breeze wisper
though my hair
and even one care passes
through my mine
im stairing clock and waching
time run on by

im a sitting here cuz
im sick of you playing with my heart as if it were a game
im just lieing in my room drowning in morele shame

im sick of it

so right now...
im gonna safe my self
before you hurt me agian
i pick up the shap knive
and that was then never never end
of that lonley girl friend

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Savior

    I really liked this poem but i think you need a little structure to it and i think if you did that, then it would be a truely wonderful peice of literature, i know that your a very talented writer.

    Hey writing like me isn't all bad now is it kiddo? i mean i am sure that your a wonderful and talented writer all your own, you don't need to write like me because i am me and you are you, that is what makes the world a place that should be lived in...that and children...for they are the most innocent things on this earth...and truely are amazing...they can make your life seem so much better.

    Five/Five

    Signed,
    Dark Savior

  • 19 years ago

    by littleshadowgirl

    thanxz

  • 19 years ago

    by Shadows Collide

    Hey I absolutely love love this poem. It's a very talented write.

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By littleshadowgirl