Woman of Beauty

by Heather M Craig   Mar 7, 2005


You parade your beauty
and everyone seems to notice
the unblemished body
and the curves they can't resist.

Behind the painted face of a woman
lies a naive child in soul.
Powerless to emotion and wisdom,
nothing but beauty to behold.

_Heather M Craig_

*I expected it to be a lot longer but I found all the words needed in the short stanzas...forgive me for the sterotype, I don't believe all "beautiful" women have never felt emotion or ceased to have any knowledge, however, most do suceed in upholding the sterotype.*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    beautiful job, fyi i got a poem coming soon, just i should have it finished by maybe tomarrow or tonight! take care luv always

    ~lil slam~ PLP!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by My Obsεssion

    I thought for two stanzas that really did say a lot. Good points!

  • 19 years ago

    by Bizarre

    those last few lines you said -- so true. it may be short, but it's another great poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by ChildofGod87

    Heather, this was amazing girl! Very inspirational poem:X Great Work! Keep it up! *5/5* ~God Bless You~

    -x-Sedusha-x-
    Hugs to you sweetie!

  • 19 years ago

    by ŦōüċhÌήğ ỀνĬĽ

    Very stong and truthful! Excellent job once again! 5outta5 from me! Keep it up my friend! :o)
    Shannon

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