Brighter than blue

by BleedingAngel   Mar 7, 2005


I walked home from a party one night alone
the dark surrounded me, I was on mu own
I could smell the summer, I breathed the air
A wind touched my skin and played with my hair
At the party I saw a boy looking at me
then he took my hand, it came so suddenly
we danced and kissed a bit too
I noticed that he's eyes were brighter than blue
Late that night I had to go, I was on my way
it was hard for me to leave, I really wanted to stay
On my way home he was on my mind
I didn't even notice that some one grabbed me from behind
He had a knife and forced me ti lie down
he took my clothes off, I was naked on the ground
I was scared, I thought I was going to die
and I knew that no one would ever hear my cry
As he raped me I thought, this isn't happening to you
and then I looked in to his eyes, they were brighter than blue

Copyright 2005 - Sabrina Stelmach

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  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    That was really good, well written, and depressing. Keep writing!

  • 19 years ago

    by Janice Brown~©~

    omg well done... loved it... crazy twist at the end but it was really good.....
    keep it coming
    luv always
    Janice
    xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    I really liked that! You are a great writer. By the way i have a poem further up this page called i hate. I would like to know how it sounds to help me improve if you have time. Thanks :)

  • 19 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Thank you so much sweet Katie, your comments mean alot to me....He he funny you mentioned the secound line, it was suppose to say "on my own"....but thanks any way!

  • 19 years ago

    by katie!

    ps good twist at the end