Wow, thats really sad, :(, the only thing I would have changed was instead of using alone on the second line you could have done On my own, Still a great poem, I love reading your work keep it up you good writer you

ps good twist at the end

Thank you so much sweet Katie, your comments mean alot to me....He he funny you mentioned the secound line, it was suppose to say "on my own"....but thanks any way!

I really liked that! You are a great writer. By the way i have a poem further up this page called i hate. I would like to know how it sounds to help me improve if you have time. Thanks :)

omg well done... loved it... crazy twist at the end but it was really good.....
keep it coming
luv always
Janice
xoxox

That was really good, well written, and depressing. Keep writing!