by katie!
Wow, i relate to this a lot, I feel the same way, well done. 5. Amazing :D |
i relate...great poem 5 |
by Dorotea©
That was really well written and good, though it was sad. I usually don't like this kinda poems, but this one was so well written and the flow was so good that I really liked it, and u deserve 5/5 for this one! |
by stephyG
omG...Our PoemZ likE totallY relate to Each othERz FeeLingZz... MwAzz Dnt WorrI i knoW How u feel Coz i feeL DA samE way. FeeL frEe 2 talk mWahz StEphY :):) |
by GoodMorning
aww hun, this is so sad =(.......i can really relate to this one......hope you're ok......if you need to talk ill be here, i hate seeing other's in pain, unless they deserve it, and im pretty sure you dont......try to keep your head......and keep on writin' your poems are great ~lots of love and hugs~ |
by *liZ*
i feel ya, im more starvation than that but i understand the feelings... |
by *liZ*
very good poem that is! not that problem!! had to make sure you knew what i meant!! |
by Lecrissa
I liked this. you need to fix (ti) to (to) 4th line from bottem. |
by TrUtH hUrTs
hmmmm very true for a lot of girls this is a very well written piece good work |
by SplitSided
This is the first poem i've read outta your collection..it isn't bad..suicide isn't my bag..but it was good..keep your head up...check out some of my work...hit me back...peace |
by shadowlight
This is a very god poem. just 1 point the word ti needs altrering to to. |
Mirrors should be smashed to pieces. I am not fond of mirrors either. My view is in my poem Distorted relefection if you want to read it sometime. |