i really liked this it wasamazing!
i dont live with my dad and havnt seen him for years and its like hes dead to but atleast ur dad didnt choose to leave well wat im tryin 2 say it that i wish i could help i think i kinda no what ur goin thou oh dnt worri it was brilliant!! lilkit xx

That is really sad, Im sorry for your loss it is an amazing poem well done tkae care xxx

wonderful poem but i am so sorry for your loss. i hope you'll get through this.

a great poem with lots of meaning. i reallyl iked this one. i'll check out some more of your poetry (a 5/5)

Nice poem. Sorry bout ur dad. Dat was beautiful.

I am really sorry to hear about this, I am here if you need anything. This has been written really well and you are a really talented writer. Love Emma xxx

Forgot to mention 5/5. Keep writing. Love Emma xxx

thats a beautiful poem, my dad didnt actually die but he's out my life forever, so i can definately relate. keep up the amazing work.

I'd hate to criticize a poem that holds so much emotion and sorrow for you.

but...if I stretch my imagination a bit, I guess I can feel a stab of pain every now and then as I read the poem.

I'm very sorry about your dad.. I wish the best for you.

that was a really great poem, and soooo sad, im sorry for your lost, keep up the great wrriting!!

beautiful poem, it touches my heart and im so sorry for my loss, 5.5
Samz*~

woah u have amazing ability to put feelings into prose
very well done indeeds
be strong and may god bless you
hugs from me too:)

Great poem. five stars

Very sad poem, and I hope everything okay now. I liked that poem though, cuz it was very well written and the flow was good too. 5 for this one! Ja hoppas att du har det bra!
SatuzKa

oh gad!!!! im so sorry for ur loss!!! I havent lost my dad so i dont have a clue what ur going thru! but i lost my grandad when i was 8! he was like my dad! i live with my dad.. i have arguements with him... but i guess i have to be greatful for actually having a dad! very good poem! if u ever wanna talk! im here!!! goldigga18@hotmail.com!
*plz check out my poems*
hayley xxxx 5/5

Im really sorry about your dad. But everything happens for a reason and in the end you will realize why God took your dad. :-)

I loved your poem. It is really good. I still have my dad. I don't know what I would do without him. Hes my world. I am here for you.Its okay. If you ever need anyone to talk to then you know that I am here for you.

R.I.P

Loved the poem and sorry for your loss. Keep the memories of your dad in your heart forever. Hugs and Love, Angela 5/5

5/5
that's all i can say

wow... deep. I like that poem and I am sorry for your loss (5/5)