That is one of the mosti beautiful poemas have ever read.. It really got to me, the sadness... Keep on writing

Really sad girl=) And good too=)

i tend to like poems about people who died, even though they make me so sad.

By the way, and not to insult you or anything, I think it's written "I sat down and cried today"...

I'm not sure though...

Keep ut the good work!!!

Would you care to read "The Fate of a Dreamer"? Leave another title for me to read as you comment on it=)

Thank you

BEAUTIFUL 5 out of 5, ill guna read some more xxxxxx

Wow that was so awesome, it brought tears to my eyes. I know how you feel, and all the pain that there is inside. I love your way of writting, keep up the great work,

love brittany

:O,awwwe! SO much emotion.I love it! That totally brought tears to my eyes. I'm truly sorry about your loss. I know how much it hurts,I've had close people in my life pass away. I hope your copeing better now. You really let your emotion flow in your poem, you defintly showed everyone the pain your going through,and how much you miss your dad. Nice job.

great poem babes, sorry bout ur dad...
abbi x

amazing and really sad..

awww sweet poem espec likd the end! cant say anything other than that! well done
xxxLoUxxx

wow great poem, im so sorry for your loss!!! amzing poem thought, your a great writer!! take care xxxxxxxx

hey this was really good and very touching 5/5 xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

wow...reading this makes me feel to cry...it's so very real, 5, great writing

wow that is so sad and heartbroken, I'm so sorry for your loss....Gosh I hope that you are ok??? I'm here for you if you need to talk!!! Great poem It was really touching....

*Hugs Sabrina*

Very heart felt with alot of emotion but read like you were reading a journal. Most poems like this are the same style i did one simular for my Grandmother. Its called farewell to grandma I think but if you scroll through my work you will find it its the only on with grandmother in it but you did better it gave you a clearer picture of your emotion keep on plugging away at it. Robert

great poem so sad tho and deep!! sorry for your loss and im sure your dad will b happy and waching ova you

Jacs
xxx

im sorry about ur dad, that was such a great poem though, so well written, it bought tear to my eyes, keep up the amazing work xxxxx

very sad i am sorry a great poem even though its sad

Utterly beautiful - your Dad would be proud of you and your ability to express your feelings in this way. I hope you are well honey and take care xx

I don't know why I didn't comment before...(I remember reading this, lol)

If your dad could see your amazing talent he would cry...This poem is great.

wow that was grt and im sorry abt ur loss
but he is alive in ur heart and he is always theree beside u ....
always smile
peaceeeeee

This is beautiful. Not much has made me tear thus far into this site, but you...you did a great job. Im so proud of you.
~Hina