Awww
very good sorry bout ur dad

A very heartfelt poem...5/5
All the best to you..
;-)

I honestly don't know if I will be able to bear losing either of my parents. Great poem.

Hey, great poem... it's so sad. I'm sorry for your loss... keep your head up. 5/5

~ Tina

Very emotional words...im sorry about your situation though that led u to writing this poem. My thoughts go out...keep the poems coming!

omg:( this is so sad. my father passed away 1 yr and 5 months ago today. youre not alone. im here if u need someone to relate to
take care and best wishes
Paulette 5/5

I gave it a 5 because i loved the use of words and the way you shared your love with your dad it was a great read keep up the good work...

oh my god your poems make me want to cry. So sad and so sweet. I'm sorry for your loss.

you got to be strong, youll make it through

i can completely relate. i cried when i read it. very well writen. bravo.
~Freak~

Powerful and well written.

sad and beautiful. loved it. keep up the good work. love, Marjan

Great poem.. very sad.. I am very sorry for your loss.. 6.51 on the 6.66 scale.. wish you the best.. Ronin

Wonderful poem . Sorry to her abot yor dd . Stay strong .. Thank you so uch for reading my poems .Means alot
April~

omg that is soo sad and EXtremely well written GREAT JOB !!! 5/5
love always,
abcede

this is gorgeous. Im so sorry for your loss, this was such a sad poem. Delicately written. 5/5

Ohh how sad! I'm sure he smiles down on ya! great job! i can really see the emotion written in this! you flowed nicely and kept me interested! 5/5

awwwww i'm sorry about your dad
but Heeey It was AWESOME i really loved it
inspiration and well expressed
keep going
Nema
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nice job! keep writing!

So sad...well done for writing about it. The rhymes were broken-which made it even better in my opinion. Hold on, chin up and keep writing. :~) X