my dad passed away so I can definately relate to this poem...its well written, almost made me cry. Good work once again! |
This is my fave so far. Beautiful and heartfelt... wonderfully written. |
by ...:NiKi:...
i love it, it has good details, and is sad |
ow... wonderful written as a poem... and i am terribly sorry for your loss.. be strong... |
by Tiller
Wow sorry for your loss!..great poem..besides that your told me to check out this poem in one of my comments long while ago..great poem |
by Loulou
Wow had sad i am crying and i am so so sossooososo sorry for your loss |
by craZygirl
I really like your poem.. it was amazing.. i lost my dad for about a month ago :'( |