by Amanda
I don't live with her anymore but thanks :) |
Hey Amanda....This is a very sad poem, sorry that you feel this way about your mom and that she did this to you!! This poem reminded me of my dad, cause he use to hit me too and I hate him so much for it!!! And I never felt like my mother loved me, she never cared......No one deserves to be put down like that!!! i hope that you are okay, now that you don't live with her anymore??? |
by Maddie
wow that was great! sad though. all of your poems flow very nicely |
by hussain
a good poem about a very sad story.... very sorry to have heard/read u went through all that. It was vey moving and ur emotions were displayed and reached out well in the poem. Take care. |
by David Paul
Sorry you had to go through something like that. To many people do. Its a good poem and I think you made your point. It made me feel sorry for you and I don't really feel sorry for anyone. good job. |
by Gemmie Lou
gr8 as usual! xxx |
by Amanda
I'm back on this old account and it's great!!!!!! :) |
by Robert
Very emotional and real a good peice of work you should feel good about conveying this so well great job!!! |