Wow, very good I can really relate, well done good write keep it up

Wow, this is a great poem hun! So great! I can relate to this a lot. Keep it up.

Love,
Tiff

luv it. keep it up

So sad but very well written! Loved it!

wow i loved that and i can really relate to it! awesome i gave it a five keep it up you have talent

This is really sad..5/5

light yet really deep... you gave it this bubbely feeling...Cant explain it...

Xox Sherrie

I hope this poem has helped get rid of some emotions that have built up inside. This subject may be cliche but you did a good job. Thanks for sharing.

Getting used to feeling
feelings I've never had

the poem flowed well apart from this point...the rest is really good. but as i read it this part it hindered the flow abit maybe the repeatition of feeling. Overall it was a great good poem and i like the style and enjoyed reading it. take care.

Sorry to keep commenting on your rhyming scheme, but:
'Getting used to screaming
Into my pillow fighting pain
Getting used to seeing
something I can't have'
The 'pain' and the 'have' are totally out of sync with the rest of them poem. I like the way it's quite snappy and repettitive though. x

yet another poem that i can relate to! love it!

well written honest dark poem

this is really from the heart i can tell. it touched me, keeps writing!!!

Perfect...that's all there is to describle this one. It pretty much remindes me...of me. I loved it. Good work!
*Jordan-Paige