Fantastic job! I knew you were added to my fave for a reason. :) One of the best poems I have read in recent days. The words in this are not only very true to life, they make you think long after you have read this piece. Great job!! You get an excellent 5 from me.

Thankyou both kindly Bob your a respected fave and so are your Butterfly - your words are always welcome :o)

great job! :)

WOW!!!! That is my favorite poem of yours yet!! WHat a powerful message Eirisa..You know I feel that exact same way as you do about society and I know everything you said is true... I'm lost for words right now sis that was totally mind blowing!! It did bring me to tears tho knowing young kids, old people, and yourself go through stuff like that..while were all in our warm houses people are living on the streets...while we sleep in bed ...kids and adults are in jail..I hate that! Funny how a thirteen your old girl notices that and society can't...You go girl that was just amazing..well done..couldnt have said it better myself!
~Chelsey~

OHHHHHH Thanks friends~