Love is what makes all of us complete...very true indeed...beautiful poem with nice rhyme scheme....keep writing...take care...FIVE>>>

Insipiration is a tool used always to the better, and you really did a good job in this poem...I don't why but having now read this poem twice I cannot help but feel there is a unlying secret meaning, maybe I am mistaken...Please do tell me if that is not the case.

As with all of your poem it was fantastic.

Your friend
Hayley

Yes HJ this poem was inspired by a private message you sent me. From the information I gave you about my life your conclusion was‘if I may quote you; For the good or bad your life is very pulled and stretched out across many places. Which I can only imagine leaves you either complete or incomplete. Unquote . I suppose my writing is my first love. My hope is to receive and share love through my poems, the first line; We need love to make us complete From the top of our head to our feet symbolizes unity in diversity, each parts of the body are important. Light of love from pole to pole Touch the latitude of our soul is a soul turning like the earth. light = good dark = bad I also was thinking of highs and lows as exemplified by a bipolar. I believe there is fire earth and air
Oceans of life, spirits everywhere Eternal souls for everyone born. Physical and psychical
I swear by all that has been sworn. Calling upon the witness of the Creator We long for love so pure and sweet Has anyone had enough to eat? Can’t get too much love Nourished with our daily Bread Are we not also consumed while fed? Bread is a personification of forgiveness and a person of the Trinity
Can anything be stretched farther than a thought? Words express the mind, heart, and soul.
From the order of the universe completion is sought Good orderly direction= God the force that makes us whole.

all I can say is that it was beautiful and very well done....5!

Wow. This was amazingly breathtaking! I loved it. Keep it up and take care! Oh and thank you for the comments/votes --- they meant a lot! God bless! <3

luv it. good job