Torn Away

by Gabby   Mar 8, 2005


I'm being torn away
Moving to a place brand new.
I'm being torn from a life I love,
But especially from you.

You're my best friend,
Sister for life.
But being far away,
Just doesn't feel right.

You've been my shoulder to cry on,
And accepted me for me.
I've blocked away my heart before,
But I've given you the key.

We're not "joined at the hip"
As some people say.
But we're joined at the soul.
In my heart you'll always stay.

Our friendship is like a river flowing.
Its had some rocky moments, but we keep on going.

And in that river is where we reside,
Our souls flowing together side by side.

Im going to miss you and all our good times,
Going to dances and parties, and hanging at the mall,
Just going through life with you and our friends..
Knowing its "all for one, and one for all"

I wish my dad didn't get a job so far away,
And with you I could always stay.
But since Im going to a place so totally new.
I want you to know..
I can NEVER forget you!!
By: Gabby

This is dedicated to Lindsey! My best friend and sister for life. i love ya girl!!!

PLEASE comment and rate! i need feedback, even if its not that great. that way i can see what to improve. ty!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mariah

    This is a really nice poem. Good job and keep up the good work... I like this poem cuz it makes me think wut i would do if i couldnt chill with my best friend anymore... i'd be devastated.. :(! But I really enjoyed this poem, it captures all ur emotions..i give 2 thumbs up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Neha

    Aww, great poem. Both of you sound like good friends to have, and you're lucky to have eachother:) Well, 5/5 keep writing!
    ~Neha