The rain of disolved hearts

The rain is coming down outside,
and I never knew your pain.

Did it hurt so bad to you, that we have to leave this stain?

It's coming down outside,
you're soaking wet, as I try to bring you back inside.

But you want nothing more to do, but run away and hide.

It's coming down outside,
Believe it or not, it hurts me as much as you.

It's coming down outside, but to me, it's coming down inside too

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