by Ksusha Mar 8, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
Why should I wake up |
by Mommy And Me
It was a good read, but i felt like it wasnt over... i think you need another stanza to wrap up the text. |
I like the way you formared this cute poem |
This was quite nice, I liked the shortness and clarity of it. also quite liked how you turned things around in the end, especially because it stands out as it almost changes the flow of the poem with that one line. Well done! |
by N J Thornton
I really liked this one. Although I could kind of foresee where you were going from the beginning, it was very touching and I'm sure it’s something most people can relate to. You did well putting across the desperate feelings of wanting this person that only wants you in return in your dreams. |
CUTE I can relate alot to that, i hate waking up lol |