Yea that was very good lot of emotion 5/5

CUTE I can relate alot to that, i hate waking up lol

awsome write

I really liked this one. Although I could kind of foresee where you were going from the beginning, it was very touching and I'm sure it’s something most people can relate to. You did well putting across the desperate feelings of wanting this person that only wants you in return in your dreams.
The only suggestion I would make is about the use of question marks. You used one in the first stanza but then never again. To tidy up the poem either, use them in every stanza, or not at all.
Well done, a lovely and moving poem.

This was quite nice, I liked the shortness and clarity of it. also quite liked how you turned things around in the end, especially because it stands out as it almost changes the flow of the poem with that one line. Well done!

I like the way you formared this cute poem

It was a good read, but i felt like it wasnt over... i think you need another stanza to wrap up the text.