~ she said goodbye to me
~ take care, 5! always believe in love ~amit

Wow, very good,
Featuring your poems basically puts them on the featured poems list, say if you have an old one that you like and you want people to read you feature it so it doesnt go off latest poems and sit there for ages xx

aww this is sweat ur a good writer :'(
-Lady JAz 5/5

5th line mean not means. other wise 5/5

impresive..very very good..5/5

Shannon<33

great feeling, so strong and full of emotion

When I'm gone I won't think of you
I'm better of this way
and I know I'll make it through
I will be okay

Love this part and it hurts to think about the one who hurts us.

Pretty Good...I think you can do better though...Take no offense, just being honest..
Ash