I like this poem. I think it would also sound great put to music. You got talent.
Try writing some love poems, i reckon you could do some good stuff.

Nice Job 5/5 u and ur friend have talent like brin said kepp wirting

OMG ITS CRUSH! damn rite i wrote it lol. remember the rap??? lol woo xxx

Ooo i can relate to this one, i think most girls can. it'd make a good song

stef/xx