by Elizabeth Ann Mar 8, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
The day is fair, as kind to my reflection and my genuine smile. Remarking as I pass another how pallid they compare. My all unknowing and mysterious center while my focus cranes on clever gray…then delight is wan for every hour I glance. |
I adore how you tell me which lines you favored, it doubles my pride. |
by FTS Miles
Lovely! So many images beautifully worded: |
by Victoria
Very deep poem but amazing a very good write!! |
by FallenxStar
thats great, i love it! |
by pinkalias
Fantastic. Your text and usual style is there and the ongoing beauty that you present in it is flawless. the imegries you display through the piece are, as usual, beautifully written to an extent that entraps the reader in a sense of a fantasy-like atmosphere, and the vanity and ignorance that you provide to the narrator is worked into thorough detail and understanding, |