by pinkalias
I really liked this. I admired your beginning symbols and interpretations. My favorite was the first line, |
well actually it was meant to be cliche..because i was talking about how the originality in life keeps me holding on, only to be dissapointed by what i see beyond the beauty..and then I swich onto something boring and uncreative, just to swich back onto a more lucid thought..sort of exemplefying the idea as a whole..you see something beautiful in the poem, then you look down the next lines to see something lame only to come to a good point once again which keeps you reading or rather hanging on to the poem |