by Robyn Park Mar 9, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Life is a prison, |
That was the most amazing poem I have read so far!! Excellent job..you write very well in all your poems.. keep it up i enjoy reading them :) |
by VampyraKiâ€
Nice job sad but you got the point across good |
by Sarah Ann
I really like this...It seems like the words were taken from my mouth. I wrote a poem with the similar idea. it is called "Trapped in a prison" Stay strong and hold on hun, everything will be okay in the end. xxx |
by Rolo
I loved it. The wording, the imagery, the flow...it all went together wonderfully. Awesome job. |
Wow, I liked that. That was very well writen. Well done. 5/5. Thanks for the coment, means alot to me! |