Wow, I liked that. That was very well writen. Well done. 5/5. Thanks for the coment, means alot to me!

I loved it. The wording, the imagery, the flow...it all went together wonderfully. Awesome job.

I really like this...It seems like the words were taken from my mouth. I wrote a poem with the similar idea. it is called "Trapped in a prison" Stay strong and hold on hun, everything will be okay in the end. xxx

Nice job sad but you got the point across good

That was the most amazing poem I have read so far!! Excellent job..you write very well in all your poems.. keep it up i enjoy reading them :)