Looking Disappointment In The Eye

by JustAFoolInLove   Mar 9, 2005


Blade into flesh
Seeking crimson repentance
Always biting so wickedly
From a single steel tooth

Colors mix as I frenzy
Dash into a dreamland
Of thick, viscous rivers
Filled straight up from my veins

With each heartbeat that comes
The bloody mess grows
Intensity ravishes
As painful climax appears

I feel like I’m running
Through darkening forest
Where thorns and sharp branches
Have their way with my skin

When I’m done and it’s over
I slowly climb up
To peer in a mirror
Looking disappointment in the eye

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  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    Wow. Looking back. it was about a year ago to this month that I FIRST met you.

    And you know what? Soon enough...it'll be a complete year. And if by that point, we still aren't talking...I'll be spending our first day of meeting anniversary all alone, crying my eyes out, begging not to go to school if its a school day, just like how i spent my Valentine's Day and the day before that.

  • 19 years ago

    by EpithetPoet

    Very good. Poems that dont have a rhyming scheme usually bug me but i like how you did this one. I think your name is very brillantly done as well :)
    -A

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    I like the title. I can relate because every morning when I wake up, I look in the mirror and i look disappointment in the eye too. :*-(. I'm sorry if i get a bit depressed with you sometimes. I don't know why but I feel too much. It sucks, but I'll hold in there if you do!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    You can be whatever you want to be!! lol! As far as I'm concerned, I love you. I love you right now more than I love my family, that's how much you mean to me. I love you Zac, and I must sound like a broken record, but please don't leave me. I think I'll die if you leave me now. I love you!!!!

    xoxoxo
    ~Sierra

  • 19 years ago

    by JustAFoolInLove

    oh, my god... hey, can i be your friend? please say yes! that would mean the world (and more) to me! i love you, too, sierra! i really do! you're awesome!
    *Zac*