TOO YOUNG

by Cristi   Mar 9, 2005


Sorry i haven't had a lot of time to think about a title ? so help me out here

get high
drive by
commited
your life by suicide

what the have IN common you will soon tell
just listen to my story all about hell

there
was a girl who lived a not so great life in the hood
going to school
to get a education
and doing stuff
normal girls should

but it went to far
her and her girls dated gangsters who thought there hearts were toys

until one day she herd on the news
a green Chevy was done
in a yard it lay-ed 4men dead
then she started having suicide run through her head
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why so precious
why so young
but can i say
I've myself have done

talking to you from heaven
they let her through the gates
cause her life was not yet finished cause the girl was only 11

committed suicide
cause her boyfriend made stupid choices
but she wanted to be with him
but ended going to hell
and a life yet not fulfilled

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  • 19 years ago

    by my_little_secret

    i iked the broken stanzas and the jagged structure, kinda makes u feel the disorder and the chaos.