I think we all have cried over a lost love, your words put it in focus so well. |
by Brookeღ
Been there and done that many times. I like the way u write about the truth another good poem! |
by Fireflower
wow... that poem is so true.. i loved the words u chose.. keep it up! |
by Chad Reamer
this poam was really good and i write the same way as u.cant believe ur single though |
wonderful poem. keep it up^**^ |
by katie!
Wow, very powerful poem, I really like your work, This one was so well written, well done keep it up xxx |
by Chad Reamer
excellent poem 5/5 keep up the good work and cant wait to hear wat u say about mine |
i have already commented on this poem but since you wanted me to comment on it again. so here i am~!!~ |
by Dorotea©
yeah, i've felt the same way. Very good write, I enjoyed reading it. I don't really have any critique for this poem, over all i thought it was a pretty good poem. I'll give it 4, good job, keep on writing. |
Sad poem and simple but good. Keep up the writing. |